Sorry use this one (I didn’t mean to change the first sentence):

“We are honored and humbled to be selected as the Governor’s Export Excellence Award recipient for 2013,” said C. A. Vossberg, President of Electron Machine Corporation. The recently-approved Sales Tax Exemption for manufacturing equipment has been a tremendous asset for Florida manufactures. I would like to thank Governor Rick Scott, Senator Alan Hays and the Lake County Board of County Commissioners for fostering a business-friendly environment that enables manufacturing companies to prosper in Florida.” 

Electron Machine Corp. is headquartered in Umatilla and they are a world leader in manufacturing and design of in-line process refractometers. 

Looks good to me.  I’m not sure if the description of what they do should be part of the quote though.  I made some minor suggestions. How about this?

“We are honored and humbled to be selected as the 2013 recipient of the Governor’s Export Excellence Award,” said C. A. Vossberg, President of Electron Machine Corporation. The recently-approved Sales Tax Exemption for manufacturing equipment has been a tremendous asset for Florida manufactures. I would like to thank Governor Rick Scott, Senator Alan Hays and the Lake County Board of County Commissioners for fostering a business-friendly environment that enables manufacturing companies to prosper in Florida.” 

Electron Machine Corp. is headquartered in Umatilla and they are a world leader in manufacturing and design of in-line process refractometers. 

What do you think

“We are honored and humbled to be selected as the Governor’s Export Excellence Award recipient for 2013”, said C. A. Vossberg, President of Electron Machine Corporation.  Electron Machine Corp. is headquartered in Umatilla and they are a world leader in manufacturing and design of in-line process refractometers.  “We would like to thank Governor Rick Scott, Senator Alan Hays, and the Lake County Board of County Commissioners for fostering a business friendly environment that enables manufacturing companies to grow in Florida.  The recently approved Sales Tax Exemption for manufacturing equipment has been a tremendous asset for Florida manufactures.”

Adam Sumner, CEcD

Manager

Economic Development & Tourism Department

Lake County Board of County Commissioners

315 West Main St. Suite 233

Tavares, Florida 32778

352.742.3904 Direct Line

352.742.3918 Main Line

asumner@lakecountyfl.gov

http://businessinlakefl.com/

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